INT, HOUSE
BEDROOM
TWO PERSON, Bodies writhing on the grand bed
She was on top, he was on the bottom
Sweat glistened on her silky smooth skin
hair tousled from rough handling
grunting, thrusting, moaning the couple was oblivious to everything else
CUT TO EXTERIOR
RAINING OUTSIDE THE DRIVEWAY
A TALL MAN , hooded in a black parka
making his way into the back
carefully and silently wrenched the back door open
FOLLOW MAN
INSIDE
Man creeps silently on his way to bedroom
guided by the sounds of the passionate love making
CUT TO BEDROOM
man still thrusting frantically, women kisses man
suddenly they were startled by the sound of thunder
the man looks to the window, the corner of his eyes catching something
sees the man with the hooded parka, shouts out something
women startled, looks at man in parka, eyes widened with recognition and starts to tremble
Tall man raises his hand, a P226 is shown equipped with silencer, he shoots
BANG BANG twice onto man on bed
Surprisingly he didn't shoot to kill instead he shoots the mans kneecap.
man in bed is writhing in agony, his legs a pool of blood
woman is frantic and screaming, tall man yells at her to shut up and stay in the corner.
Tall man ties up woman, and gags her
FADE OUT
FADE IN
Dark blood congealed on bed
Tall man is setting up a video camera, pointed to bed
man in bed is propped up into front of camera
Tall man stands behind camera
tall man asks in a calm stoic almost clinical manner
"Answer with a yes or no"
"Were you or were you not fucking my wife"
man on bed whimpering "oh god oh god oh god"
tall man repeats question, man on bed still whimpering
tall man shoots again at man in beds FOOT
man in Bed screams "YES, I WAS FUCKING YOUR WIFE!!"
PAN ONTO TALL MAN'S FACE
A satisfactory smile is shown
CUT TO
Tall man as he then takes the woman and also put her in front of camera, ungagged her
asks her with again a clinical voice
"Were you or were you not fucking your boss?"
She whimpers, an almost inaudible "Yes"
DISSOLVE INTO VIEW OF VIDEO CAM VIEWFINDER
Tall man speaking to viewer
"Well there you have it a confession from both parties"
with that he then shoots the man in bed
BANG between the eyes
Woman, shouts, cries uncontrolably now
Tall man is now hugging her, whispers to her
"now now, I wouldnt put a hole in your head, I love you too much for that"
"I wouldnt want to make a mess out of you"
Instead I'll make you drink this
He takes out a bottle of what it seems to be liquid poison
Woman Shouts some more, tries to squirm away.
tall man holds her down and forces the content down her throat
She chokes, her eyes starts flutters, we see the white of her eyes
bubbles starting to foam in her mouth
Tall man hugs her gently, smoothing her hair, as if holding a baby
he holds tight her as her life force withers away
finally as she dies he closes her eyes, wipes her mouth, then kisses her gently
PAN TO TALL MAN
Tall man takes a mobile phone out, dial's 911,
he reports gunshots in the address of the house.
Then proceeds to shoot himself in the head
Tall man dead while holding woman
ZOOM OUT TO CAMERA VIEW FINDER
Sirens are heard outside the house
the police have arrived
FADE OUT
***
This was something I dreamt a while back, maybe all the blood and gore is because I was reading WANTED the graphic novel, which was VERY GRAPHIC before I went to sleep...
This dream disturbed me when I woke up... but it sounds like some thing that could come from a thriller movie, couldn't it?
This dream disturbed me when I woke up... but it sounds like some thing that could come from a thriller movie, couldn't it?
1 comment:
Wooo! me like this one! "Bang Bang, My baby shot me down" - Nancy Sinatra
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